Last part! Please tell me what you think of my novel all the way through so far! Ill send more when there is!?

pretty good i think you need to describe the creature more (not all of the way, leave some room for a shocking decription later) if you want, try telling the reader that she barely caught glimpses of a shadowy figure in the night...or something like that to clarify that the main character has not seen the monster and the reader feels more included in the intimate details of the story